Revisions

Revised file (PDF)

All my notes are in the revised PDF file.

Formatting errors and typos need to be corrected in your script.

Content revisions, deletions, and notes are only suggestions.

Notes & Revisions

Script Revisions

On any lines where I have made an edit, there will be an asterisk in the right-hand column. The edit will be underlined. Any suggestions to delete text will be in "strikethrough" (a line through the text).

In-script Notes

These will appear directly in the body of your script. My notes will usually be on the line following the part of the script they refer to and will be in a red Arial font.

General Notes

My General Notes will be at the end of the script.

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